COMPARATIVE/CONTRAST PARAGRAPH

Listenning heavy music is often very different from listenning classic music.
The music's style of the firts photo  is heavier than the style of the second image. Heavy music is noisy and annoying, while classic music is more peaceful. When you listen heavy music, you feel horror, nervous and insecurity, because it is a hard music. In contrast, with classic music, you feel stillness, serenety and relax. 
Difference from classic music, heavy music is characterized by wearing black clothes and playing loud guitars.
The men of the firts image, Johnny Rotten, wearing informal clothes, while Rostropovich wearing a shirt and a tie. He wearing formal clothes.
To playing classic music, you need instruments like violins, a double bass, violas, a choir etc. However, in heavy music, you need a drum kit, strong guitars and singers.
They are opposite styles. Heavy is a hard style and classic music is more formal and peaceful than the other style.

DESCRIBING A GOOD TRIP

     A place that I love too much is ''Los chorros del río mundo''. Mundo is a spanish river. His affluents is the river Segura.
I visited this place when I was young. I went with my family and my best friend Nayara. We went there for five days and we stayed in a rural house. The area has some impressive sceneries, like rivers, cliffs, mountains, caves... It was very beautiful!

     The firts day, we went later to the camping and we were tired, so we went into the house, we left the luggage in our bedrooms and we slept.
The second day was more active, because we went to the river and we swam. We didn't swim in other place because was dangerous. We had to go across bridges and places with many trees and plants.
The secenery was incredible, because there were rivers and green areas. Also, we saw animals, like squirrels and rabbits.

     This was a safe journey, because I learnt new things and I saw places that y don't see normally in my country. It was a hair raising experience to see the nature.  In the future, I want to go again!

    

LIVE THE LIFE

Work and study are very important things to develop our future, but these things shouldn't accuracy all our time and life.

I think that there are others activities to do which also are relevants to clear our head. They're called hobbies.
Many childrens want to sign up in extracurricular activities like football, dance, tennis... because they love that. This is good for them, given that childrens can make new friends and at the same time they practising sport. If kids don't want to go to activities out of the school, they don't have to go. It is their decision, because is a voluntary activity.

The problem is that many parents, apart of school, they want that their childrens go to English classes, music classes, bilingue etc. Many childrens don't want to go to this classes because they're yet swamped and tired. They want to play with others childrens and amusing, because in the morning they have to go to school, doing exercises and studying.  This is bored for all childs.

They don't have enough time for doing that they love. They are frees to choose they like because if they doing a thing which they hate and going by force, it will be better and it'll a waste of time.

Childrens should do sport and others activities. We shouldn't forget that they're childrens and they are in the school age. Childs have to playing and be in contact with other people.

GIANT'S CAUSEWAY

      This beautiful place is called ''Giant Causeway''.It is in the Northerm Ireland. It was created 60 millions of years ago.
The legen tells that two giants: Finn MCcool, the king of Ireland, and Staffa fought and trought rocks, which made Causeway.
 
      This construction is bigger and it was made with hexagonal blocks and columns. Is a place too cold but it is impressive. I think Causeway is possibly dangerous for walk, because there are many rocks.
The area has a breathtaking scenery like cliffs, rocks... and open spaces.
The scenery is very beautiful because you can see how the waves breaks into the rocks and you can feel the sound and the smell of the water.

      In the future, I like to go to Ireland, because has beautiful places as Causeway.
If I go there, it will be a hair raising experience for see new places that I don't see normally.
     

''SYNNOVE''- NOVEL

I sit in a cold and dirty rock and I sleep there. Suddenly, I heard a little noise but I think that it's an insect. I sleep serenely.
Suddenly, appears a wrinkled hand and it catch me. I shout but anybody heards me. I'm lose.
My shout break the silent but it's useless. I treat to escape but it's impossible. He is more stronger than me.
He have a sword. He looks me and I close my eyes because I feel horror.  I'm conscious that I'm going to dye.
I see how the sword has pierced a body, but there isn't mine. I open my eyes and I see a young man, with black hair and yellow eyes. He's too rare. It seems that he's from another world. While he's moving near me, I lose the consciousness.
I feel fear. My end is near.

DESCRIBE SOMEONE

Per response for: Nayeli Hernández Pascual.
By: Mónica López Olmos.

Dear Nayeli:
I think that the topic sentence can finish after ``too much'', and then you say ''she helps me when...''. In the second sentence you can replace'' make'' for ''do'' in that context, and ''as'' for ''like''. I think that after ''as'', the verb ''prepare'' have to include ''-ing'' and also ''help''. In the last sentence I think that ''with'' must be replaced by ''for''. I think that the next must include two or three supporting sentences more which count what you like to do with your mother. There isn't any conclusion because you don't have enought time so you must include it in the next text.

• NEW TEXT:

 My mother is a person who I admire too much.
She helps me when I don't know do anything. She is a good example of perfect women, because she can do many things at the same time, like preparing the food, helping my brother for his homework...
I like tell my problems to my mother because she helps me when I can't find a solution. I'm too insegure, so my mother gives me the confidence that I need.
When she's buying new clothes, she asks me if I like the clothes. I'm her perssonal advisor. 
We love go shopping, making chocolate cakes...
I've learnt many things from her, and I hope learn more thing in mi life.
My mum is an important person in mi life, together with my dad and brothers. Is my example to follow and my best model.

GUERNICA, PICASSO

``Guernica`` is an impressive picture of Pablo Picasso. The tittle is a mention about the bombardment of Guernica.
The image is about the Sapanish civil war. It's a bigger picture.
When I saw this picture in the Reina Sofía Museum, I felt horror and I was disconcerted , because it is a several chaos: humans and animals are distributed for all the picture and they are desorganized. Bodies and heads are deformed. If you don't know the meaning of this picture, you'll think that this image don't have sense, but it's not really.
I don't like it, because it feel me bad and it's too sad. There are people that is crying, a warrior that is dead, a woman with her dead son...
I prefer pictures that is not in black and white and make me happy.