SPACE DEBRIS

INTRODUCTION
Space debris are very dangerous for the world and the space. They can cause physical damages, such as when space debris fall in the Earth, they destroy things like cars and houses,so people feel horror.  Furthermore, they can be contaminating for people that live where the object falls. They also have beneficts like the spacial objects that fall in the Eath can be valubles in the future.
Althought space debris can be good, there are certain risks due to they can cause a lot of damages in the Earth.

CONCLUSON
The fact that space debris are very dangerous makes that people feel scary and disconcerted with spacial objects, because they cause physical damages and they are polluting for the Earth. They have many disadvantages, but also, they are goods.

PEER RESPONSE
TO: LORETO BEVIAR GALLEGO
BY: NAYELI HERNÁNDEZ PASCUAL

Hello Loreto,
Your introduction is very good, because it achieves all the requisites to be a good introduction: it is formed by seven sentences, so it is correct because an introduction have always five to ten sentances. I think you hace introduced the topic clearly due to it attract the readers. Then, you have written sentences of information about the topic. In my opinon, you should have written more sentences to explain the topic, because it's too short. Finally, you have written  a good thesis statement.
The conclusion also is good because you have summarized that you have written in the introduction.